Aquatic show?

So I was thinking this was going to be a Blue Stars 2012-typed show...maybe have "Nautical" in the title. Just an aquatic-type show. How do you think it's going right now? Anything that looks weird or that may need to be changed? What do you like/dislike about it? Any comments/critiques/questions are definitely welcomed! I want this to be one of my best-designed shows yet!

micromarching.com/preview/john-davis

I like it a lot so far! If anything , i would say that the guard is a little odd, and instead of them always being in a block, you can make them window each other. I would also make the impact set longer, as i didn't really catch the effect because of its shortness. I love the transitions, the energy, and the way you carry out the theme. I cant wait to see this published!

I agree with acelj9 100%

I feel like you should just forget about the halt at set 10. It makes sense that you want a impact halt moment there, but you can bring it out with the guard if anything. I just feel that since the brass is so separated, the impact just isn't as strong as it could be. Also, I would fix up set 17, the marchers are off the field, not sure if that's what you wanted or not. If so, leave it, that's your design and you are allowed to do as you wish. If it was a mistake, well now you know.The show is good so far! Keep it up!