Critique for Landry Kendrick

I know it's not too much, but if I don't like one section, I won't like the show as a whole.

Main focus is INDIVIDUAL forms, so please comment on that.

Cleanliness
Design
Flow
Spacing

Thanks!

micromarching.com/preview/landry-kendrick

I noticed that the spacing in every section was perfect. Design was flawless and flow was...flowing...to say the least. I can't wait to see the rest of this show. =)

The only thing that I would do differantly is to change the color of the flag's. I don't think it matches the uniform's very well, it just dose not look like the right color. Everything else looks really awesome.

eh, to be honest, I'd need to see the next set, it looks fine, the second transition seems to have a different flow than the first. It is clean though, design, again, goes with flow, and spacing looks alright

I agree with biscotti, the second transition give a bouncing effect. The top mello line, repels away from where they just came from. It could be good, it could be bad, it all just depends on where you are going with the rest of the group.

^^agrees