Critique for Adamjd

This is something I just started and I'm beginning to think the opening drill is too spread out and isn't readable. Please tell me if this is so. The purple objects and people are supposed to be what are stretching the band. (Ignore the props in the top left corner). Thanks so much! =)

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There is nothing at all wrong with your show and awesome drill and use of the entire field. The only thing that caught My attention right away, is the band's uniform's are way to light. I like florescent color's. But you can scarecly see the band. I would change the band's uniform's color's. They just make the band hard to see.

I actually liked how wide you cover the field with the opening drill. I think it's just fine.

I also like how you expanded everything in the beginning, then continued using the whole field in the opening sequence of sets.

Thanks guys. =)