Critique for Tim Sparks

Ok, so obviously im having lots of trouble writting some new drill. This is another one of my frozen shows that I have taken out to work on. Some help? I can see many ways to write out of this set, but I cant choose which direction to take. Uhhh! writter's block sucks!

micromarching.com/preview/tim-sparks

I'd bring the guard to the front and do a big triangle hit point with the band. Just a suggestion. I really like the small band feel you've got going! I can't wait to judge the final product. =)

Your doing very well, sticking to the show's theme and I like what looks like a music note on the end. I don't know that I would change anything.