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Critique for Lucas Rigo
Also, what could I possibly do with the next sets to make this show better?
At the end of this preview, I like that you spread out the guard. I think throughout the show so far, the guard is too close together. Maybe give them some room and it will add to the overall general effect of the show. =) Also, try and keep spacing consistant among the entire band. The charts are looking great and these are just my suggestions, feel free to take what you wish. =)
I assume you got the 911 idea from My drill, My 911 show, to this day, reamain's My most liked show. What I would do, is take the two and move it more towards the left and wident the one, making it a little taller. I wonder how many people, will make a drill, honoring the day.
Bryan, you are correct. it is almost "based" upon your show... BUT, i put my own spin on things.
Adamjd, thank you for your valuable comments. :)
Everything Adamjd said...and:
Try not to do a lot of section moving. What I mean is, don't have one group of marchers move in a set, then the rest in the next, then back to the first group. This really messes with the flow of the show. I think if you worked more with the whole group at once, this show could be 22% better.
Thank you Baritone B1. I will definitely take this into consideration. :)
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