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Critique for Astrognash

Astrognash Sep '10  /  edited Sep '10
I'm looking for a general critique, as well as ideas for a title.

micromarching.com/preview/astrognash

EDIT Sept. 07: I've really reworked the drill quite a lot, and I'm thinking I'll call the show "Precision Scatter Band".
blakep Sep '10
Set 16-17 fix the collisions with the percussion and horns, and throughout the show, adjust the spacing in the tenors. Interesting show you have
Bryan LaHaise Sep '10
Very nice drill work so far. How is about go big red for a title, since you have red in your uniform's.
Adamjd Sep '10
The drill is looking great, however the guard and drumline haven't done any of their own things. Perhaps try to add in some cool guard work/drill that is separate from the rest of the group.

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