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Critique for EvanGregory

Evan Gregory Sep '10
Here is the next in my series of "cleaning out the freezer"
Thanks for any advice, comment, or heck anything.
BTW guard work is not done but drill is for the most part where i think its ok, so if you have comments on not enough work it will be there eventually, it usually just is really tedious to do good guard work so i save it till i amavsolutely sure that,here is where i want my impact yadda yadda yadda.
Thanks

micromarching.com/preview/evangregory
Adamjd Sep '10
Wow! That last impact with all the colors was really...impacting. =)
I really liked the show. There's two comments I have, 1) the color on the backs of the uniforms didn't really seem to fit the theme you were going for with the flag color choices and 2) The part where you did all the uniform flashes got a little bit tedious.
Other than those minor little color details, it truly was great. This series is turning out great. I can't wait to see more.
Bryan LaHaise Sep '10
This is an awesome show so far. And I loved the special effect's with the band uniform's, turning around and showing the yellow. The gaurd however colorfull it maybe, could perhap's use brighter color's, to go with the bright yellow on the back of the uniform's. The gaurd is indeed very colorfull, I am just not sure that it's the right color choices for what is happening with the band's drill and it's uniform's. Awesome formation's and drill work and gaurd work though.

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