Create Your Own Marching Shows

Latest Posts

Main Forums

MML Discussion Show Critique Ask a Question

Sub-Forums

Show Design Band & Corps Music Writing Competitions

Feedback

Suggestion Box Report a Bug

What's Up

Joe's Work Log Announcements

Follow Us

Facebook Twitter

Critique for Tim Sparks

Tim Sparks Sep '10
This is a show that I put into the freezer a while back and decided that its time to work on it. I only have one set because, ONCE AGAIN, I have hit writter's block. The show is called, "Trapped" and it will be a sync.

micromarching.com/preview/tim-sparks
Geoffrey Sandler Sep '10
Drag the drumline down, slide the brass over and stick the guard inside
Bryan LaHaise Sep '10
Have the top come off like a box, releasing the person who is trapped. The flag person.
Adamjd Sep '10
Maybe have the one guard member in the middle have a different flag and the rest of them are trapping it. I think I would move the two sides of the band square move together, towards the centre guard person, and then fold the top horizontal row into a column and do the same with the bottom. I hope these comments help with your writer's block. =)

Log in to add a comment.