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Critique for bigdog

Connor Parrish Sep '10
This is my next show called "Birth by Sleep". I'm trying to take a Phantom 2010 approach to this. It's inspired by Kingdom Hearts's "Dearlly Beloved".(see other link below) Tell what you think and any suggestions or critique is more than welcomed. Thanks =)

micromarching.com/preview/bigdog

youtube.com/watch?v=WOJ6bzveAlE
Ringo Sep '10
From only one set, theres not much i can tell you, except that you could make your curves a little less "edgy" in some places. Theres a couple places where it almost looks like an angle. Im sure I wouldnt have noticed it if i hadnt been working on curves for the last half hour though.

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