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Critique for clover

clover Sep '10
any ideals postive ways to improve my show or negtive drill sets
thankyou

micromarching.com/preview/clover
Bryan LaHaise Sep '10
First of all, I like everything that I see so far, it looks pretty awesome. What caught My attention on the last set was, you can take the two curves on the right and left side of the field and turn them in such a way that it makes them look like ear's. Cause what I see in their is two circles which could be eyes and a curve turned in such a way that it looks like a sad face, so why? not finish it off. By turning those two curves in such a way it looks like someones ear's. Hope it help's.
Adamjd Sep '10
I like that the show is so east to read! There's never any question about what the form is supposed to look like. My only advice is at the beginning, it seems as though there's always two halves of the band that are seperate. Maybe try to bring them closer together, and attatch the symmetrical drill. It will add unity to the show. =) Awesome ideas.
clover Sep '10
thankyou for your help

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