Critique for anthony achille

ok well i am kind of stuck to getting to the first set and getting out of the last set. i wanted to build up to the giant follow the leader and well i just don't know how to get out of it. do not worry about flag work for now. it will be put in later. ill check up on this when i get back from dca championships as i march for white sabers this weekend.

just have a go at it.

micromarching.com/preview/anthony-achille

The drill it self is totally awesome so far. Their is a couple spot's in the last chart I saw, where the instrumentation is somewhat not together. As far as what to start out with, that will lead you into it. Would a picture formation like a star on the field work. As far as getting out of it. How about a big company front.

One thing that helps me is breaking into groups of 5 or so, and just meandering across the field. It's actually a pretty cool look visually, especially when you just snap back into a crisp, clean impact form.