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Joe1 Sep '10

I'm stuck. Its supposed to be a kinda Egyptian themed show. Does it seem finished or is there another Egypt inspired form you think should be incorporated into the show? Any thoughts, feedback or advice would be greatly appreciated.

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Bryan LaHaise Sep '10

Is their a way that you could turn the Pyramid into the Sphynx. Or, if you want to end it with a Religious Theme. Have the pyramid's form the Ten Commandment's. Such as the two tablet's of stone. After all Moses came from the desert in Egypt to Mount Sinai. That might be an idea.