Gladiators Flight

First time I've ever made a song. Its like a march...heres the link
noteflight.com/scores/view/96161e6f1bffbab984f0ac5...

I'm not so sure about the drum set beat fitting in with the trumpet line. I do like the melody though.

yeah sorry about the drum set...i tried to make them like a bass drum and a snare like a march style but they didnt have those kind

Ah, ok. I got you now. I can imagine that.

yeah tried my best to make it sound like a march...couldn't make the repeat signs work so I just took them out.

I would take all of the flute stuff up an octave.

ok...thats what I though too.

Anyone have any ideas of how to make it better?

i think you should add some bass or electric quitar.

If you're going for a gladiator theme I don't thing the guitars would work.

I would take the kit out and maybe put timpani or something in its place.

...sweet that's an interesting idea...I like it

i cant find the timpani on this program, or I can change the name...but I want to add about two more instruments to it.

I liked that duplet-triplet stuff you had going. Maybe add more of that.

Thanks. I'll try to add more to that or either incorporate that into my new song coming up