Critique for bigdog

This show is titled "Earth ElementALL", a show about the element earth/rock/dirt, etc. I'm looking for some really creative ideas, especially when it comes to the last set. ive seen a lot of members use this move, but there has been a lot of variations. Please help me get a nine on this show. Thank you very much!

micromarching.com/preview/bigdog

If I could suggest one thing- open up that spiral in the beginning a bit. It's actually really nice, it just looks a little cramped to me.

I'm not exactly sure what you're wanting to do with the last set, I've used that move before. What do you have in mind for it?

idk, something like a Cavalier Machine at the end of their 2006 show, when they move to the right and have the inner member march around to the back, while the others do a follow the leader kind of thing. However, I'm open to any suggestions. Im really trying to aim for something that will catch the viewer off guard, and make them go "whoa!"

micromarching.com/show/cjs/contrabrand3

Something like in this?

Yes! Thats Perfect! I'm going to change a few things since i dont want to take your ideas, but that is really what im looking for Doc! thanks so much, if you have anymore ideas, please let me know! =D

Hey no problem man. Like you said, there's many different ways to make that move your own. Play around with it and see what happens. Glad to help.

Well doggie, I am working on MY 80th show. And it just has to get ME an 8 for 60th. Anyway, I love the drill work, but because your sending a message about the earth's element's, I'm not really crazy about the color of the uniform's, I know you got some brown and green in their, but I would like to see some more earth tone color's used in the gaurd and perhap's something in the area of the prop's and uniform's. Also, planning on doing anything with water, what else waves and blues. Unless the black mean's coal. I really think using earth tone color's more in the show, may make sense to what your looking to do. I hope it help's?