Critique for MARCOpolo

i need help after my opening set...the show will be called "Rise and Shine"

micromarching.com/preview/marcopolo

I like that last set, but I'm not too enthusiastic about how the groups break off to form the sun. The forms they make just seem...randomish. I don't know what to do, so I'm no better! :P

I do like where you are though.

I agree with Justin. With the last set move. it appears random. I'm sure you can find a way to creatively move those 2 lines into 5 lines of 8. :) Experiment with different things. :)

ok thanks =]

In My opinon, the only thing I would have done differantly is use warm color's, like red's, orange's and yello's. I love the drill work so far and see nothing wrong with that.

like in the flag or uniforms?

I am totally honored that you would ask Me for a second opinion on your show and that you would take My advice for adding orange and yellow as color's into the sun. I think it made a world of a differance. Perhaps adding some Sun's ray's coming out of the top of the sun too, would make it interesting. But once again, I am blown away you took My advice and deeply moved and honored. Yep I met the flag's. Leave the uniform's alone, so the rest stand's out.