Critique for Phillup11

Tell me what you think and what to fix.

This one doesn't really have a theme. I'm just trying to make a Realistic High School level show. not DCI lol. :) So tell me what you think and what i should fix to get the best score possible.

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I really like the drill, i think it flows well. I would make more of an impact with the guard. I know it still needs many sets left but a strong flag feature would make it cool, in my opinion.

At the beginning, I don't like how you pulled the lines apart, only to put them immediately back together. It messed up the flow. Everything past that looks nice.

This is a fabulous show so far, what I would do, is add some flag work, with differant shades of blue in the flag's, to go with the uniform's maybe with each toss, have them come down a differant color or some two tone blue in the flag color to go with the uniform's. I love what I see in the show and drill work so far.

Thanks for the critique. I will look into adding Flags to the CG the last closing chunk of the drill. As for the comment from Justin, i'm not sure if i can fix that since its at the beginning, but i'll see what i can do. :)

I get what Mr. Ekstrom is saying though. It just seems a little repetitive. Like pulling them apart and then putting them back together stunted the fluidity just a bit.

I just changed the first set to make it look a little better hopefully. I hope that removed that repetitive look. Tell me what you think. And i'll see if i keep it.

The transition from the opening set, to the first set, the baritones, they go straight up really fast. I think its sloppy and it caught my eye really quick. The fluidity is okay.

loved it~

True blakep. Yea, that was to fix a problem that was mentioned earlier. I'll see if i can find another way.

Thanks Dementieva :)